Angel of Death

Alas, I've come to the last chapter, but parting is such sweet chapter. I have no nit-picks or complaints for that matter, about this chapter. I liked it and it's ...

Ah, I hate being the last to critique, I feel like I'm only repeating everyone else. I liked this chapter a lot but I stand firm and direct when I ...

I was going to go back to reading Tipping the Velvet but I couldn't resist. This was brilliant one of the best things I've read on YWS. As someone before ...

Hello again! I just thought I'd check this out while I'm camping in Other Fiction. A good piece of flash fiction this is. Listen to Nate, he's a very smart ...

Another good chapter! A few nit-picks: “That is that,” Mr Murdoch said firmly. “You will come with us, my dear, and welcome to.” When they arrived at Coal Yard Alley, ...

I am really liking your story. Your dialog and descriptions are improved and I like to see improvement. I love your characters and everything about this story. I certainly wasn't ...

'Ello Sarah. I like Victorian and Regency era stories, so I quite enjoyed this. The nit-picks were already pointed out but I will say that I think your execution could ...

Avery Orchard Avery smiled and then set her bags down near the other bed. The room was plain, but it wasn't dull like her room at her aunt's house. Sighing, ...

You're so pretty. I love your guitar. My cousin has one almost like that one and every time I ask her if I can play it she says no. =( ...

Well I wish you all the luck with your endeavors! I just think it's so cool that you've finished your book. Hopefully one day my characters will finish there story ...

Zack Daniels The bus was hot and it smelled of old people and sweat. With his I-pod turned on high, he rest his head against the glass, his eyes on ...

Sabrina She could feel the tears in her soul but they didn't rain down her cheeks. Again she had condemned a soul to nothing but hell. A part of her ...

Hey there! Your title is what dragged me here, as I just love vampires and I thought it was going to be the beginning of your typical vampire love story ...

Hey niccy_v! Hmm, this wasn't terrible but for a prologue this can be better. It was executed fairly well but for the beginnings of a story of this caliber this ...

Hey there! First I would like to say that I appreciate your patience. It's sad that no one reviewed this for about twenty four days, but to tell you the ...